The story is clear. The setting is good, you put the character i the right setting. But the visual is not really good. The Animation is not moving smoothly so be more careful next time. It doesn't have any sound effect so some part i don't understand. next time, remember to put sound effect. The song background is good and it is perfectly fit with the story. But in your pivot, you it show lots of writing and the animation is not much so next time, you should make more animation because if you put more animation, it is more interesting to watch.
Is the time for the writing far more than the real video? I like your background and the story. But like Justin said, the stick is moving unsmoothily. And Wendy, I thought her birthday is next week =='. Overall, a good video. I would give you 8,2/10
The story is clear. The setting is good, you put the character i the right setting. But the visual is not really good. The Animation is not moving smoothly so be more careful next time. It doesn't have any sound effect so some part i don't understand. next time, remember to put sound effect. The song background is good and it is perfectly fit with the story. But in your pivot, you it show lots of writing and the animation is not much so next time, you should make more animation because if you put more animation, it is more interesting to watch.
ReplyDeleteOkie.. thanks for ur advice bff :P But ur cmt had a lot of wrong grammars :)) muahahaha >:) hey anyway, thanks :P REMEMBER TO COME TO MAH BDAY :))
ReplyDelete:)) I like your animation Kristie. ^.^ Happie Birthday
ReplyDeleteIs the time for the writing far more than the real video? I like your background and the story. But like Justin said, the stick is moving unsmoothily. And Wendy, I thought her birthday is next week =='.
ReplyDeleteOverall, a good video. I would give you 8,2/10